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Blink 3 of 8 - The 5 AM Club
by Robin Sharma
36 Ways to Improve Your Sentences
Good Writing by Neal Allen and Anne Lamott guides aspiring writers through the creative process, providing insightful advice and practical exercises to enhance their writing skills and cultivate a unique, authentic voice in their work.
A sentence comes alive when something is actually happening on the page. This starts with choosing verbs that do real work. Skip the all-purpose ones, "walked," "got," "moved," and find the verb that knows what it’s describing. Your character can stride into the room, or shuffle in, or slip in through the side door. It’s choices like that which sharpen the picture and often remove the need for extra adverbs.
The same trap waits with “to be” and “to have.” Sure, they’re sometimes necessary, but watch they do to a sentence. Writing “he was tired” puts a man in a chair, whereas “he sagged into the chair” puts you in the room with him. Or watch what happens when “she had no money” becomes "she’d spent her last twenty on the train” – the latter tells a small story. When your verbs carry the weight, the sentence pulls the reader forward.
That forward pull continues when you favor active construction. If the subject performs the action, the line usually lands with more force and clarity: “The board approved the budget” beats “The budget was approved”. A sentence can still go passive on purpose, especially when you want to spotlight what was done to someone, but the default should be energy over drift. Even forms that are not technically passive can soften a line if they add distance, so it helps to listen for places where the action feels muffled. Those need tightening, too.
Dialogue tags follow the same logic, just in reverse. When someone speaks, the attention belongs on the words spoken, not on a flashy tag. That is why “said” works so well compared with attention-grabbing verbs like “claimed,” “asserted,” or “chuckled.” It gets out of the way and lets the dialogue do its job.
Put together, these moves teach a single habit: make each sentence act, and stop interrupting that action. Now, let’s look at how strong writing also depends on sounding natural, direct, and genuinely like you.
Good Writing (2026) is a practical guide to making sentences clearer, sharper, and more memorable, using rules that apply to everything from essays and blog posts to speeches and scripts. It aims to pick up where traditional style guides leave off, helping writers turn competent prose into language that feels vivid, persuasive, and alive.
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Blink 3 of 8 - The 5 AM Club
by Robin Sharma